Review request
draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations

Request	Review of	draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-02
	Requested revision	02 (document currently at 16)
	Type	Early Review
	Team	General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
	Deadline	2021-12-20
	Requested	2021-12-03
	Requested by	Henk Birkholz
	Authors	Michael Richardson , Wei Pan
	WG chairs	Henk Birkholz , Joe Clarke
	I-D last updated	2024-07-03
	IESG document state	IESG Evaluation::AD Followup
	Completed reviews	Dnsdir Last Call review of -12 by Nicolai Leymann (diff) Iotdir Telechat review of -12 by Dave Thaler (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -13 by Pascal Thubert (diff) Secdir Early review of -03 by Christopher A. Wood (diff) Genart Early review of -02 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Intdir Early review of -02 by David Lamparter (diff) Iotdir Early review of -02 by Dave Thaler (diff)
	Comments	This is a rather short document. Currently, the document literally includes notes that highlight the need for more expositional text. Some external hints would be beneficial, I think. There's also been a bit of a discussion about geofencing and potential issues with bundling the MUD manager with resolvers.
Assignment	Reviewer	Paul Kyzivat
	State	Completed
	Review	review-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-02-genart-early-kyzivat-2021-12-18
	Posted at	https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/jV4U_nM_vhGwY5dxx-VTVfalNVE
	Reviewed revision	02 (document currently at 16)
	Result	On the Right Track
	Completed	2021-12-18

History

Date	By	Description
2021-12-18	Paul Kyzivat	Request for Early review by GENART Completed: On the Right Track. Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat.
2021-12-10	Paul Kyzivat	Assignment for Paul Kyzivat accepted
2021-12-09	Jean Mahoney	Request for Early review by GENART is assigned to Paul Kyzivat
2021-12-03	Henk Birkholz	Requested Early review by GENART