Fix 'should' and indentation

w3c · Sep 29, 2021 · 3ecbdaf · 3ecbdaf
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@@ -290,22 +290,18 @@ <h3>
           This section is non-normative.
         </p>
         <p>
-          Resource [=Request=]s [=fetch=]ed by a non-null [=request/client=] should be included as
+          Resource [=Request=]s [=fetch=]ed by a non-null [=request/client=] are included as
           <a>PerformanceResourceTiming</a> objects in the [=request/client=]'s
           [=environment settings object/global object=]'s <a data-cite=
-          "PERFORMANCE-TIMELINE-2#performance-timeline">Performance
-          Timeline</a>, unless excluded from the timeline as part of the
-          [=fetch|fetching process=]. Resources that are retrieved from
-          <a data-cite="HTML#relevant-application-cache">relevant application
-          caches</a> or local resources should also be included as
-          <a>PerformanceResourceTiming</a> objects in the <a data-cite=
-          "PERFORMANCE-TIMELINE-2#performance-timeline">Performance
-          Timeline</a> [[PERFORMANCE-TIMELINE-2]]. Resources for which the
-          [=fetch=] was initiated, but was later aborted (e.g. due to a network
-          error) should be included as <a>PerformanceResourceTiming</a> objects in
-          the <a data-cite=
-          "PERFORMANCE-TIMELINE-2#performance-timeline">Performance
-          Timeline</a>, with their start and end timing.
+          "PERFORMANCE-TIMELINE-2#performance-timeline">Performance Timeline</a>, unless excluded
+          from the timeline as part of the [=fetch|fetching process=]. Resources that are retrieved
+          from <a data-cite="HTML#relevant-application-cache">relevant application caches</a> or
+          local resources are included as <a>PerformanceResourceTiming</a> objects in the
+          <a data-cite="PERFORMANCE-TIMELINE-2#performance-timeline">Performance Timeline</a>.
+          Resources for which the [=fetch=] was initiated, but was later aborted (e.g. due to a
+          network error) are included as <a>PerformanceResourceTiming</a> objects in the
+          <a data-cite="PERFORMANCE-TIMELINE-2#performance-timeline">Performance Timeline</a>, with
+          their start and end timing.
         </p>
         <p>
           Examples: